One possible version: Dear Xiao Hua,
I have just come back from a trip to the United States.I had a very good time there. I first went to New York.It is really a very big city.I saw quite many skyscrapers there.But the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center ale no more to be seen.Two days later l went to Los Angeles.I visited Hollywood on the day I got there.After that I spent a whole day in Disneyland.It is really a wonderful place you shouldn’t miss.I also went to Reno,Nevada. There is a beautiful lake named Dahu.The scenery there is attractive!
I hope you will take a trip to the United States some day.